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Feb 2022 haikuchallenge spoken-word
I love a haiku, don’t you? https://fawm.org/forums/topic/12694/
It is there always A longing, a dreaming, yet Still I am alone
I love haiku and this is a lovely piece that provokes thought and evokes empathy.
Ending with voice only was effective. Very dreamy sounds. #tit4tat
This sounds like the intro to a bigger song..I think you can develop this further. Very nice #tit4tat
These feels like a cool interlude between two longer songs. I love the voice, it’s incredibly soothing to listen to. #tit4tat
Beautiful and simple haiku and the low-fi backing sets the mood so nicely. Could be the last (or hidden) track on an album, if you wanted to end on that kind of note.
Short and sweet. Certain has a place on your FAWM album. I like when an album contains some short quirky bit. Thx!
Beautiful and also presented with great effect
This is gorgeous stuff. Truth.
High drama--dreams, looking forward....reality bites. Melancholy departure. Good stuff.
That's a killer haiku! The last line just socks you in the gut. Well done!
This is beautiful and sad. So glad you joined in the challenge. The music and spoken word work perfectly together.
@kahlo2013 Mar 2022
I love haiku and this is a lovely piece that provokes thought and evokes empathy.
@darcistrutt Mar 2022
Ending with voice only was effective. Very dreamy sounds.
#tit4tat
@gm7 Mar 2022
This sounds like the intro to a bigger song..I think you can develop this further. Very nice
#tit4tat
@humantornado Feb 2022
These feels like a cool interlude between two longer songs. I love the voice, it’s incredibly soothing to listen to. #tit4tat
@kenficara Feb 2022
Beautiful and simple haiku and the low-fi backing sets the mood so nicely. Could be the last (or hidden) track on an album, if you wanted to end on that kind of note.
@robheron1 Feb 2022
Short and sweet. Certain has a place on your FAWM album. I like when an album contains some short quirky bit. Thx!
@sph Feb 2022
Beautiful and also presented with great effect
@katestantonsings Feb 2022
This is gorgeous stuff. Truth.
@timfatchen Feb 2022
High drama--dreams, looking forward....reality bites. Melancholy departure. Good stuff.
@crisp1 Feb 2022
That's a killer haiku! The last line just socks you in the gut. Well done!
@melaniepegge Feb 2022
This is beautiful and sad. So glad you joined in the challenge. The music and spoken word work perfectly together.