Wow I could have picked a better key for singing..... Oh my! But its a skirmish so I'm going with it.....
You and I started out
In the wrong way
Thats ok I'll wait
Forever and a day
Icy blue valentine
I really have a crush on you
But you have been so icy blue
An icy blue valentine
You said go fly a kite
Then you said 'not yet'
Then you asked me
To forgive and forget
Conflicting way with words
Used like a weapon
Secretly I hope we're
A match made in heaven
@fonte Feb 2022
Wonderful performance, your voice is so good, and just love the playing. Really really good, enjoyed very much.
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
Good contrast since valentines are usually red. ;) The chorus raps up the thought in an artful way.
@winchperry Feb 2022
Good way to tie Valentine in with a frozen wintery holiday. Unique take and very nice!
@musicsongwriter Feb 2022
Beautiful song full of true love emotion. The key you've chosen sounds beautiful! Wonderful singing, playing and atmosphere.
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Love that surprise last line! Puts a whole new spin on the phrase. Love the title/hook. I like the style of your quiet vocals.
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
Really sweet - there's a lovely fragility to the delivery that suits the vulnerability of the lyrics. Very nicely done!
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
This has such a sweet feel to the music and vocal but the lyric has some dark undertones of a someone taking advantage of another (to me anyways) Really nicely delivered. Fantastic skirmish song, that title is brilliant
@whispermouse Feb 2022
Great melody on "icy blue valentine." I really enjoy the sweet, wistful feeling of this whole song. Great skirmish.
@berni1954 Feb 2022
I like how that emotion filled vocal plays off a simple "folk" feel pick. And those lyrics are full of mystery and with confusion and even hints of menace.... Chapeau!
@johnstaples Feb 2022
Well, this is really beautiful! Such delightful fingerpicking and your lovely vocals make this a real treat to listen to! "Icy Blue Valentine" is such a cool title/hook! Really nice skirmishing!!!
@blindsheepdog Feb 2022
love the vulnerability and floaty feel
@majormajormajormajor Feb 2022
Man, that last stanza. This is dark! There's an undercurrent of self loathing there, and returning to the chorus sweetens it but just slightly. And great chorus btw. Really excellent balance. This song has such economy- implies so much.
@arthurrossi Feb 2022
I like the tender guitar melody in combination with your lovely voice... The lyrics contain some beautiful imagery like "fly a kite" or "icy blue". Beautifully done!
@keithcuts Feb 2022
Lovely ode to your love
The trials and tribulations are felt in the lyrics
Nicely done
@odilongreen Feb 2022
There's a dark loneliness, with just a touch of hope, to this that's very affecting. Your delicate vocals just really drive the emotion of the story home. This deserves to be heard late an night, with the lights low, just to envelop oneself in your atmopshere.