Feb 2022 s021122a feb1112skirmishno1 experimental eerie surreal airplane
Thanks to @mardeycranbleson for the prompt.
It ended up a bit experimental and strange and it is best with headphones. I found the prompt difficult, and have been appreciating how others managed to do so well on their songs!
From https://randomwordgenerator.com/paragraph.php write something in some way based upon the following:
I'm heading back to Colorado tomorrow after being down in Santa Barbara over the weekend for the festival there. I will be making October plans once there and will try to arrange so I'm back here for the birthday if possible. I'll let you know as soon as I know the doctor's appointment schedule and my flight plans.
heading down, heading up
tomorrow,
after being,
up there, down there
over the weekend
once there, once here
will I arrange it
so I'm back here
so I’m back there
if possible?
Is here there?
is there here?
Is here there?
is there here?
will I be
making plans?
I'll let you know
as soon as I know
I’m over here
I’m over there
making plans
to go
over there
over here
Is here there?
is there here?
Is here there?
is there here?
heading down, heading up
tomorrow
after being
up there
@roddy Feb 2022
I really enjoyed this. I listened with headphones and the two voices were rally engaging. The rhythm was hypnotic. Great take on the prompt.
@writeandwrong Feb 2022
Love the rhythmic accents. Pithy repetitive lyrics add to the topsy turvy feel throughout. I feel like poppies have been had! Thinking of Pink Floyd's, "...Is anybody out there?..." lol Very cool and nice performance!
@chroes Feb 2022
Lovely experimental approach! Enjoyed you playing with call/response and left/right over that very dry rhythm and sparse skeleton of melodic elements. Great skirmish.
@erbaer Feb 2022
This completely captures the frenzy of modern life and travel. The music in the background sounds like you piped it through an airport PA system. We're all turned around!
@johncrossman Feb 2022
The title set up my expectations, so now I'm listening to see how they compare... ooh, weird panning talk, I like it. This puts us in a daze, which is a pretty common experience when flying. I'm listening on speakers but I can tell my brain would be ping ponging even more if I had the headphones on. I like the noisiness of it even, like a tape, which makes it feel even more organic. Definitely reflects and induced a dazed state!
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Cool interplay layers of vocals beats, and synth sounds. I like how you combined the repeated vocal lines. Great creative use of prompt.