I said I was done with love songs. Never say never, I SUPPOSE.
Always
Sinking slow
No chance
Can’t let go
It always comes back to you
And I don’t know what to do
I’m writing a song or two
Cuz now all you are is my muse
Gently
Thoughts arrive
Suffering
So sublime
It always comes back to you
And I don’t know what to do
I’m writing a song or two
Cuz now all you are is my muse
Comic
Tragedy
Chained up
Bound by me
It always comes back to you
And I don’t know what to do
I’m writing a song or two
Cuz now all you are is my muse
@liz561 Feb 2022
Yes-the picking is lovely and I really like the chord progression in the chorus. You really did a lot with minimal lyrics.
@kenmattsson Feb 2022
Nice writing here, and agree with doglatin that your picking really works for this song.
@doglatin Feb 2022
Real nice, the melody, finger picking, and lyrics. I like how you use the very short lines for the verses, dragging them out. "All you are is my muse" is a great phrase, and hook.