A song where I had the music written and the lyrics written separately and found that they kind of worked better together.
The amazon is burning
and we are all turning
to the words on fire
burning in the pyre
the city is all ashes
burning for the masses
tensions they start flaring
we are all left staring
we don't need a fire
burning us away
we don't need a fire
we need a fire escape
@chickenjail Feb 2022
Agreed on the Sabbath vibe. I like the "fire escape" turn of phrase
@driftwood1 Feb 2022
Feels like a complete thought. Fire escape is a strong metaphor and the lyric as a whole works well. And you know I dig all the harmony guitar!
@downfallroad Feb 2022
Wow. The tag says unfinished, but the song has all the pieces to be completed. The production on this one is a big step up too!
@whispermouse Feb 2022
Getting a Sabbath vibe from this one, with more guitar harmony. The subject matter is totally appropriate to the style too. Love the all the fire, then "we need a fire escape" - nice!
@fonte Feb 2022
Awesome track name! This kind of reminded me of the Doors crossed with Rage Against the Machine (which, let's face it, would be awesome lol) :-)