Feb 2022 s021122
I already had the chorus for this one and part of a verse, was lucky that the skirmish suited it today!
Not really sure how to phrase and what melodies to use just yet but this is the bones of the song!!
Her love for him
Is strong within
Her love will stay
Always the same
And when they walked together
Side by side
Leaving all life’s troubles
Left behind
Those precious times
They’d look at eachother
Was like no love
I’d seen from another
Her love for him….
She’d rush out to get
His morning paper
A brew in one hand
She’d make his whole day greater
He’d show her love from within
In simple ways
Fooling around
He’d make her laugh all day
Her love for him….
@nick120968 Feb 2022
Nice one Chris
@andygriff Feb 2022
Well done fella, really liking open this sounds with those chords. Gives it a floating, wide-screen feel. Nice lyrics too. Doing good!
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
I like the way you have phrased the vocals around the chords used. It has a nice rhythm to it with the guitar gently pushing it along. Really good skirmish write
@keithcuts Feb 2022
fun and stressful is the name of the game lol
what a delightful song write!
it takes me back
delightfully played, sang, and delivered
a really sweet song well done!
@mariekevinkmusic Feb 2022
I love how you have embraced FAWM and are just writing fearlessly. I like the space in the chords. There is a kind of floating feel to the whole song. Might benefit from a middle 8 with a change in chords/melody but it is definitely an excellent skirmish :-)
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