Feb 2022
slow build to a sludgy heavy dropped tuning chorus thang part. I've always liked failure (the band). I think it shows.
NSFW cuz I said the F word
Well you can guess
I fucked it up again
Are you impressed
With how I caved it in?
It’s all a mess
I’m at a total dead end
So I obsess
And then play total pretend
How do I, go and not be leaving
Where is this, hope without believing
How do I, show but keep things secret
Where did you, go cause I’m not seeking
I took a walk
I took another breath in
Are you impressed
With how I caved it in
@lenigmusx1 Feb 2022
Great lyrics sounds like my approach to life. Just waiting for it… waiting… good groove-check… ahhh there it is warm big and Orange. Great chorus… come on big again… oh man you left it hanging so good but I was waiting for the finisher. With a solo??? Nah leaning her wanting makes her come back, right?
@jamesacop Feb 2022
the contrast of the chords between the verse and chorus is for sure up my alley. definitely Fantastic Planet-y but with a sweet poppy twist in the verses!
@consolidated Feb 2022
Awesome. Great arranging—so nice when it kicks in. You’re getting great sounds too.
@richardmasters Feb 2022
love the sentiment of the song and there's a real depth to the lyrics - are you impressed with how I caved it in - great line! I think I compete at losing sometimes. Maybe we should start a new type of Olympics!
@andyt13 Feb 2022
You said the F word! Lou Reed meets U2 vibes kinda!