Feb 2022
admittedly not my proudest - i had an hour of time in the practice room at my school today and i was about ten minutes late, so this was me working with what i had. lyrics contradict each other
The story would be awfully clean
If we found our way across the sea
Two lovers star crossed, hearts at war
Too bad I’m selfish and you’re so insecure
The narrative would rise anew
If I only ditched him and chose you
But I don’t love you
I don’t love you
I can’t love you
I can’t anymore
And critics turn their nose
I love you for the role you take
And not the one you chose
My Carol Rose
Do I text you too much
Sometimes I get in my own head
When I’m opening up
How do I know where I’m sposed to end
Or where I’m supposed to start
You found a way to my cold heart
@jamkar Feb 2022
I love your choice of chords, and where the lyrics go. Your vocals communicate the emotion so well.
@berni1954 Feb 2022
"Two lovers star crossed, hearts at war
Too bad I’m selfish and you’re so insecure"
Brilliant couplet! You had 100% of my attention from that line on.
I love your voice and especially those drop offs at the end of some lines CAROL rose...... in contrast to the raised volume of others.
And a quote from Will the Shake too? Choice!
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Cant beat a name in the title. great economical use of words! you get excellent change just by voice tone and volume! Its an instrument for sure! cool guitar line! I really like this song!
@kadmad202 Feb 2022
Impressive! Love often contradicts itself so why shouldn’t your lyrics? Great vocals, with lots of feeling. Nice!
@aeye Feb 2022
getting this one out in an hour is an achievement. This is great.
@mattwdunn Feb 2022
You are just so good. Knocked up in an hour? Unbelievable!!
Your voice breaks my heart on every song.
@jorgevallentine Feb 2022
It's incredible what you can create in such a short time! I think your vocals have gotten more emotive than ever lately and I really love it. I'm finding that happening in myself as I've worked to open up to people more. It gets reflected in how I play and sing. I don't know if you've had any life stuff that's led you to intentionally do that like it has for me recently, but whatever the reason, I hope you keep leaning into it. Music that feels like true expression of our inner selves is so beautiful.
Great job as always!
@prsongsmith Feb 2022
Fantastic - in a just world you’d be touring stadiums and closing your second encores with this one, 25,000 fans belting out every word with you.
@fonte Feb 2022
Wow what a great melody! And your voice sounds really great on this. Really like it, definitely a keeper. Love the lyrics as well.