Feb 2022 girl-with-guitar pop
I wrote this yesterday and then added some logic production (which I am just learning, so definitely not perfect!). It sounded a little too cute, so I added in some maybe rougher vocals toward the end, underneath. I think the impact is subtle but I kind of like it...
The moon settles in the dark sky
I hold my jacket closer to me
Lonely soul on a cold night
There’s nowhere I need to be
the road glitters black and gray
and the world is abandoned
moonlight to guide my way
and no need for me to run
I like to walk the streets alone
In the middle of the night
And gaze up at the stars
Wonder where you are
And how to make it right
I like to walk the streets alone
In the middle of the night
And think about the past
How nothing ever lasts
No matter how hard i try
My boots hit the pavement with a sound
That echoes through the open street
hours after midnight now
in the soul-less city
My hands in my pockets to keep me warm
But I hardly notice what I do
My body is traveling far
But my mind is with you
@serene123 Feb 2022
Lovely tune.. your vocals are enchanting and the backing vox really add a lot too.. very chilled and an easy listen
@cloudcolor Feb 2022
You have such a unique voice it works so well with the instrumentation and eery lyrics. Love everything you are coming up with! :)
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
I really love your lyrics and think your delivery is brilliant. I like how you added some layers and background vocals. Very effective. Cool sound.
@helenseviltwin Feb 2022
The other vocals make such a difference. Really give a great atmosphere. Pretty, while somewhat creepy, song. Nicely done.
@panch Feb 2022
Very nice. I like the high mix of the vocals over the simple but effective strumming.
@skyezor Feb 2022
OOOO so lovely, I really love thiiis chorus and the low howl background vocal- feels very werewolf love story to me. Such vibes and shadowy feels, dig-I dig deeply. Also, really liked that cool sound in the second chorus! WHOA!
@seemanski Feb 2022
This was the perfect song for me right now I'm currently walking the streets of Sheffield listening to FAWM tunes and you were literally describing what I was doing Gaze up at the stars, check. Hands in my pockets, check. Loved that instrument at the end, I couldn't place it though
@colgoo Feb 2022
Love that guitar strum pattern, and the doubled vox is powerful and haunting. Really well done!