Feb 2022 dark moody melancholy
Oh dear, one of those ones!
The vermin scuttle in the gutters
The drainpipes detached from the wall
The roof is open to the weather
A desolate place all together
The weeds on the front lawn, killing the grass
Animal holes in the ground
Shutters have fallen from the window frames
And glass is long gone, like it doesn’t belong
The body by the door, outlined on the floor
Forensics are taking their pictures
It seems open and shut, he was shot in the guts
But always, we need to know more
The vermin scuttle in the gutters
The drainpipes detached from the wall
The roof is open to the weather
A desolate place all together
(c) words and music G Todd 2022
@timfatchen Mar 2022
Desolation Row, without a doubt. Excellent. Now, how do i slit these wrists again? Applause!
@potentialspam Feb 2022
So much atmosphere! You really paint a picture with your choice of details. Love it!