Its 6th orchestral track. I guess this will get more interesting once I got the vocals here, because its a conversation. But still, I'm open for your ideas to add something to here.
I’m here to feel joy,
I’m here to learn.
I’m here for the friends
so can you confirm?
Fuck you are!
You’re making me sad
and feel frightened
I’m not liking this
Your horns are mightened
Don’t listen to them!
Okay I’ll try again
Maybe they grow up
If not, it would be hell
So you want hell!?
That's not what I meant
and you know that
Maybe if I withdraw
I can avoid your wrath
Be brave!
That’s easy for you to say
but I will go your way
Yea that's never gonna happen!
Why is the world like this
why can’t anything be good
Why can’t we live in harmony
and forget this mood
Is the life outside like this
or am I surrounded by evil?
Am I really wrong at this
and should I just kneel?
@elesimo Feb 2022
Love that part at 3:28 with what sounds like a vocal sample. Really cool textures here!
(And a FAWM-quirk: people don't get notified if you mention them here, so usually the workaround is to go their soundboard and reply there. Otherwise they will only see your reply if they come back to the song page.)
@povosos Feb 2022
Thank @bachelorb I'm glad to hear that if this is any help for you. And yea, composition itself is a conversation, so I figured lyrics should be too
@bachelorb Feb 2022
I’m trying to learn about synth and ambient music this year. You are really helping me understand composition with the lyrics you post to instrumentals.
I loved the bass parts in this. It really sets the songs mood.
@povosos Feb 2022
@emplate thanks for the comment and encouraging words. I think the main character is about to realise something. Or at least quetioning.
@candle Thanks for your wonderful comment. I do have an idea for vocals, but unfortunately I'm not capable to execute those :D
@candle Feb 2022
The beginning has an almost "fog horn" quality to it which I really like. I also like how this slowly develops as each part of the orchestra joins in. The bass is wonderful & the melody on top keeps the listener's interest. I'd be interested to hear how you fit vocals into this.
See You In The Shadows…
@emplate Feb 2022
I don't know if I can explain this properly, but I really appreciate your way of combining melodies with interesting basslines. They create quite a unique and dark atmosphere. The ending and it's single higher chord feels like one is on the brink of some very dark and dangerous realisation about themselves. Dunno why, but something along the lines of the movie Black Swan came to my mind.