Feb 2022 guy-with-guitar sub-two-minutes missing-my-mum
I thought @Richaaaay's 14 word challenge song was quite cool yesterday, and I noticed that this one I was working on right at the beginning of February has probably even fewer than 14 words, so I decided that legitimated it somehow, and I'm uploading it.
It's for my mum, who isn't very well.
Suddenly lost you now
Suddenly lost you now
ooh wow ooh
yes I suddenly lost you now
Looking around for you
oh you oh
Suddenly lost you now
Seems like I
Suddenly lost you now
Suddenly lost you now
Suddenly lost you now
ooh wow ooh
yes I suddenly lost you now
@nahlej381 Feb 2022
Eerie but bright. Very dreamy atmosphere. Cool arrangement and production. Pulled at my heart stings. Very cool track
@n24 Feb 2022
I love the crackly distortion on the guitar. The harmonies are so beautiful, this creates a wonderful ambience. Also a really amazing use of limited lyrics, really love this track. I'm so sorry to hear your Mum isn't well, ditto the comments below, this is a beautiful tribute.
@anthonykapfer666 Feb 2022
i am sorry to hear about your mom. the song is beautiful. love the vocal and the chord changes. really nice work
@katestantonsings Feb 2022
This sets a mood--it's very moving! I kept thinking how much I hope this comforted you. May you have good company and good music during this season. You have a very nice voice. A lovely tribute to your mom, Brisk! <3
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
This is really good. The drones give it an immediate emotional weight - and lyrically, your feelings seem perfectly captured by your 14 well-captured words. Impressive. Melodically, it might be my favourite of yours this year. It perfectly suits the mood/intent. I can tell this one means a lot to you, and I reckon you nailed a good one. Hope all is well.
@richaaaay Feb 2022
Wow...Powerful. As Andrea and DT have said, this is utterly beautiful and painfully sad all at the same time. Sorry to hear about your mom. Feeling for you and you mom...
@andrea Feb 2022
Your minimal words speak volumes. Knowing the backstory is painful. This is sad and beautiful. I wish you and your mom peace.
@mikeskliar Feb 2022
beautiful and sad.... and, I'm starting to relate to that feeling- (parents are old and not well, wrote last week about it in a song). This is really well done- the music and some of those sudden noisy bits sound totally natural in amongst that lyric of 'suddenly'
@mctown Feb 2022
Yes, that is a tough loss. Been there... hearing some Beatle-like vibes...DG
@davidtaro Feb 2022
Oh man. Huge hugs. This is simultaneously profoundly beautiful and unbearably hard to listen to, knowing a little of the context. I suspect a lot of people would find this very relatable too. Good on you for channeling it into sound form, I hope doing so was in some small way cathartic x