Feb 2022 s020922 take away songskirmish
Take Away skirmish prompt
Take Away your Fantasy
Take Away my Sanity
Take Away your Mystery
Take Away my History
can anybody out there hear me
can anybody out there hear me
can anybody out there hear me
Take Away your Fantasy
Take Away my Sanity
Take Away your Mystery
Take Away my History
can anybody out there hear me
can anybody out there hear me
can anybody out there hear me
@liz561 Mar 2022
Love the repeated figure on the guitar opening-it draws you right in. The picking is really effective. This song really conveyed so much melancholy-great take on the prompt!
@whispermouse Feb 2022
Nice guitar and vocal sound, very intimate sounding. Solid skirmish!
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
I like the chords in the verse. Good job.
@berni1954 Feb 2022
You do a hell of a lot with this repeated single verse and chorus.
You certainly leave us with a mystery, rather than taking it away.
Hearing you loud and clear here in Catalunya.
@wylddandelyon Feb 2022
Lovely vocal tone and guitar work.
@prsongsmith Feb 2022
I’m impressed by what you are able to accomplish with such economy of language. I often write twice as many words and don’t say half as much. Great stuff.
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
This is a great take on the prompt. There is pain in your voice which is really effective for the the lyric. And the softer tone at the end is lovely. Very nicely done.
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
There is a kind of anguish in the way this comes through. It could be a fear of being filtered out but there is more than that. Excellent sound! Very creative!
@kevinmason Feb 2022
I like the quick delivery of "can anybody out there here me?" This is so simple but so moody. You do so much with a little bit of guitar and a few words.
@scruffyblues Feb 2022
Ooh the gravel in that voice, raw and intense. Seriously moody, love it!
@terenziano Feb 2022
Love the mood. Intense.
@tunecat Feb 2022
Sweet start with guitar sounding melancholic. Repetition of take away effective as is the ‘ can anybody …’