Feb 2022 needs-music lyrics lyrics-only collaboration needs-vocals looking-for-collaboration
If anyone likes these lyrics and would like to put them to music, I would be very happy. Please, feel free to alter the words any way you like…
Crimson (needs music)
I do not like to warm up memories,
but sometimes we sit and drink and like this
the story just starts on its own….
I do not know the reason why
I think of her and would still like to die
for that girl in the crimson gown…
A night in April made of mysteries,
we sat close to the fire and we kissed
in that small cottage made of stone…
I really wonder what´s the cause?
no, I never fell in love the way I was
with the girl in that crimson gown…
(Chorus)
I thought I was special,
but I was just her clown,
half an angel, half a devil,
that was her,
my girl in the crimson gown…
And I still miss her,
though many years run down
since I kissed her,
my girl in that crimson gown…
What happened nobody would understand,
let’s say the start was nicer than the end,
for a long time she’s out of town…
We talk ‘bout girls we’d like to meet,
but it’s always to her the story leads,
to the girl in the crimson gown…
(Chorus x2)
I thought I was special,
but I was just her clown,
half an angel, half a devil,
that was her,
my girl in the crimson gown…
And I still miss her,
though many years run down
since I kissed her,
my girl in that crimson gown…
@franniezest Feb 2022
I absolutely love the first line it totally drew me in. “Warming up memories” what a fantastic image!
@lcad Feb 2022
This is really nice, builds a very colourful story and the adjective crimson leaves me wondering if the girl is benevolent or a witch (maybe that's the point). I love the opening lines really great way to open a story.