Feb 2022 senses guitar vox pop
One to start things off today...
The feel of velvet on your skin
I don’t know where to begin
The flow of water in a stream
Makes me fall into a dream
Senses and sounds
Everywhere around
Touching and feeling
Oh so appealing
Eating and tasting
No time for wasting
Rhyming and reason
Death or high treason
The feel of water rushing past
Trusting the weather and the forecast
The drops of rain upon your head
Rewinding through all the things you said
The feel of velvet on your skin
I don’t know where to begin
(c) words and music G Todd 2022
@mattoxic Feb 2022
Into the second verse is lovely. Nice chords, and I appreciate the guitar sound. Nicely done. Lovely voice too btw
@ohljazz Feb 2022
Lots of lovely images here - did you consider different harmonies for the second section?
@resonut123 Feb 2022
The lyric has a nice sensual romantic vibe to it.
Some nice lines in there.
The chord progression and melody are nice too.
Has a wistful tone to it.
Enjoyed the listen.
@mikeb Feb 2022
I think you DID know where to begin! I think with a full production this could really develop into a great song.