I like the feel of this a lot. I found myself singing along, and this is what fell out, after some ba da da'ing for the very first section
You lean in, you look back
You take another pomegranate out of the grocery sack
You're like someone in a photograph
What do you do all day?
Why are you even here
What gives anyway
You like to raise your eyebrow
It's like a game you play
What do you think about something like the first as a possible quirky chorus for a song about meditations on a relationship while unpacking the groceries...Happy to collaborate if the direction feels fun.
This is gorgeous. Very chilled out, and that baritone is beautiful. The lower register really adds to the relaxing/relaxed vibe here. Great choice. :) Awesome performance, too.
Gorgeous sound and atmosphere, the hopeful feeling definitely comes through in the composition. The drifty synths and reverby snare are nice but the baritone guitar deserves the spotlight, what a rich tone. Stop making me want to buy one, dammit :)
i agree, its so hard to just get a quick idea out, as you just fiddle about with everything else then 8 hours just pass by and you not made anything , been trying to get my song in my head out from 2 weeks ago but made some other nutters insted . this is a lovely gentle track and works its charm in your ears instantly . top job there.
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@nancycunning Feb 2022
I like the feel of this a lot. I found myself singing along, and this is what fell out, after some ba da da'ing for the very first section
You lean in, you look back
You take another pomegranate out of the grocery sack
You're like someone in a photograph
What do you do all day?
Why are you even here
What gives anyway
You like to raise your eyebrow
It's like a game you play
What do you think about something like the first as a possible quirky chorus for a song about meditations on a relationship while unpacking the groceries...Happy to collaborate if the direction feels fun.
@cblack Feb 2022
This is gorgeous. Very chilled out, and that baritone is beautiful. The lower register really adds to the relaxing/relaxed vibe here. Great choice. :) Awesome performance, too.
@vomvorton Feb 2022
Gorgeous sound and atmosphere, the hopeful feeling definitely comes through in the composition. The drifty synths and reverby snare are nice but the baritone guitar deserves the spotlight, what a rich tone. Stop making me want to buy one, dammit :)
@xfloorpunchx Feb 2022
I really love the lo-fi atmosphere of your track ! I already enjoyed it, even without vocal parts! The bass sound is perfect!
@jepist45 Feb 2022
i agree, its so hard to just get a quick idea out, as you just fiddle about with everything else then 8 hours just pass by and you not made anything , been trying to get my song in my head out from 2 weeks ago but made some other nutters insted . this is a lovely gentle track and works its charm in your ears instantly . top job there.