Feb 2022
You found your reason
To put your reason back to bed
You’re incoherent
Drunk on the voice inside your head
You found your reason
To put your reason back to bed
Nothing can change what’s already said
Dragging on
Confidently indecisive
Whistling past the graveyard
Whispering to the bones
You find your rhythm
When you repeat the words you’ve spoke
Your tongue is twisted
Your thoughts are gagging in your throat
You find your reason in
The rhythm of the words you croak
Stand up for something
Your voice is spitting and it shakes
Bend down for no one
You won’t still have the strength it takes
Stand up for nothing
You still won’t have the strength it takes
You won’t believe the bloody mess the bogeyman will make
We are begging you to save your life
You can’t believe your own two eyes
@daveyboy103 Mar 2022
Love the title, that is what drew me in to listen.
Great 80s electropop vibe. Nice work, right up my street
@sync Feb 2022
So much good stuff here! The title caught me - great title! The saw tooth synth and spikey strat sounds really counter balance nicely. Very retro 80s, great vocal delivery. So many good lyrics, esp like the term, "Confidently indecisive". Also like that the melody is familiar but unpredictable. I didn't expect it to go where it went sometimes. I like that. I thought you were gonna have a funky strat instrumental section after the breakdown @ 2:30, would really have loved that... But unpredictable is also good! :)
@mk2021 Feb 2022
This is a good song. I can definitely hear shades of Radiohead or Muse throughout but not so much that it feels copied or anything. Nice one.
@zam Feb 2022
My first song 2022!
I've been focused on writing music instead of lyrics so I've got five more tracks in the hopper. Hopefully I'll get a balance between music/lyrics to get on top of the 14 mark!
Let me know what you think about this one, I might be too on the nose with lyrics, but it was just time to get something posted!