I feel like this week is ending
Just like the way that it began
The windy waves are bending
We're making angels in the sand
I think the second week will find me
Holding your hand each day
I will get down on one knee
If I could only find a way
The island trees are swaying
Palms keep us in the shade
The young dophins are playing
And I brought extra lemondade
A month in Miami oh, Miami
We'll wish upon a barely visible star
I love you, my lovely Mimi
And the way you play a mean guitar!
The third week we will sing
Jingles from television shows
We'll hit the amusement parks
Revising ev'ry song we know
The fourth week we'll go home
I'll try to sleep on the jumbo jet
Bet you watch that move about Rome
Where those newlyweds first met
The island trees are swaying
Palms keep us in the shade
The young dophins are playing
And I brought extra lemondade
A month in Miami, oh Miami
We'll wish upon a barely visible star
I love you, my lovely Mimi
And the way you play a mean guitar!
A month in Miami then to Key West
I love you, Mimi, you're the best!
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Yup i can see some swing here, nice acoustic guitar, or uke, something tropical to surround this really nice well structured lyric!
@tseaver Feb 2022
Nice write: the atmosphere comes through marvelously.