Feb 2022 hymn-like blessing guy-with-piano
I was really planning to add some strings and trumpets, maybe some percussion, but the more time I spend on producing this, the less time I spend writing the next one. Anyway, I feel like it stands well as a demo, and it's ready to share.
May you always have wisdom (and follow its lead)
And blessings enough you can save some for seed
May you have friends to call on, but never have need
And peace be near you forever
May you only face trials that help you to grow
And always find shelter when storms start to blow
May the paths that you walk take you where you should go
And peace be near you forever
Be near as your heart beat, safe and sound
Your love never fly half-mast, and never touch ground
And peace be near you forever
May the places you put your trust prove to be good
May you always be heard, and not misunderstood
May you carry your burdens no more than you should
And peace be near you forever
May you always breathe freedom to be who you choose
And never feel pressure to take or refuse
May the things you most treasure be ones you can't lose
And peace be near you forever
Be near as your heartbeat, safe and sound
Your love never fly half-mast, and never touch ground
And peace be near you forever
And peace be near you forever
@mahtowin Mar 2022
This is a blessing! Amazing!
You got the gift to bring songs into life which touches my heart.
The message of this song is so clear I don't think that it needs more instruments. And your vocals are so securely leading through it - it is a joy to listen to something so good.
There also comes a seriousness and a deep spirituality through it.
My eyes got wet while listening ...
@halfwayhome Mar 2022
Lovely piano work, and a winding, soaring melody, sung with feeling and expression. And while I didn't realise I was waiting for it, this is in fact the Bob Dylan / Randy Newman crossover we've been waiting for!
Lyrically, so perfect, and anyone who hears those words will feel better than they did moments earlier. Thank you.
@cdsongs1 Feb 2022
Just lovely!
@guatecoop Feb 2022
I know what you mean about wanting to add more, but just having to say "wait" to myself. Goodness, your voice is captivating and your recording/performance is dead on. You were really patient with this and gave nice breaks--you never sound rushed at all. What a nice a song. Another good one. Well done again.
@hummingbear Feb 2022
Beautifully done.
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Absolutely gorgeous and such a prayerful and loving blessing. Love this! Perfect!
@dragondreams Feb 2022
This stands solidly as it is. Any extras (personal opinion) would detract from a great song. It's gentle and really soothing. :-)
@kenmattsson Feb 2022
This is beautifully written and performed. Wow. Thanks to @bethdesombre for recommending this! I'll repeat that now I need to go listen to your other songs. Definitely adding you to my watchlist.
@bethdesombre Feb 2022
This is gorgeous! Sounds like it has always existed as a song. Such simple but careful (and profound) lyrics. I also like "near" rather than "with" in the wish. Wow. Now I need to go listen to everything else you're writing this month!
@momentegalerie Feb 2022
Oh I like the chords and their journey. Nice voice <3. Very soothing and only good wishes for a loved one. Wonderful!!! I think I will make my first download.
@tseaver Feb 2022
Amen! wonderful write. You make that seem effortless, but the polish belies that. I would definitely love to hear the fully-produced version, but I've downloaded this one.
@scottlake Feb 2022
This is your encore song for when you are famous if that is not already the case! As such no other instrumentation is needed. The ending chord sequence is sublime.
@driftwood1 Feb 2022
This is beautiful and uplifting. Excellent stuff,
@jacobeverettwallace Feb 2022
Beautiful write, Andrew! I really enjoyed this. It's got a peaceful tenderness to it. Nicely done.
@emory Feb 2022
I would love to hear a version with all the other instruments you mentioned... but you're right, it works well with simply the quality vocals and piano!