Valentine gift for my husband of 27+ years, The first line, melody and lyric, just came to me yesterday morning. I had to figure out the bridge today. It's a surprise for David, so for those of you who know him, don't give it away.
I wanna go out on a date with you
Don't really care what we do
Ride an antique train
or go walking in the rain
I want to go out on a date
I wanna go out on a date with you
If we like it we can make it two
Go gazing at the stars
or to Karaoke bars
I want to go out on a date.
bridge:
I know dancing's not your thing
Maybe we go hear our favorite band
Just go together anywhere
put away our cares
That will make my heart sing!
Verse 2
I wanna go out on a date with you
You can even bring your cockapoo
Watching movies in the dark
or holding hands in the park
I want to go out on a date.
You're the one I picked for my whole life
I don't regret a day I've been your wife
oh, I wanna get away
Just somewhere we can play
Wanna be your valentine.
@didib Mar 2022
This is brilliantly catchy. Nice contrast in the bridge, great rhyming, lovely song!
@mandolinda Feb 2022
Delightful. Nice Valentine.
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
What a sweet song. Very well written and performed. You cover all the bases. Great job.
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
Oh wow, this is so catchy and retro. The vocals are excellent and the rhythm to the lyric is just wonderful. Really bounces along like the old time musicals. Great song
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
This is absolutely delightful! I love the jaunty and playful feel! Wonderful contrast between sections. Such lovely vocals!! Given this song I think everyone will want to go out on date with you : )
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
Super harmonies, a lovely lyric and musically really nicely done - excellent work!
@berni1954 Feb 2022
This is lovely. It has a 1960s Musical feel to it. I hope you other half loves it.
@arthurrossi Feb 2022
This is so sweet and beautiful... I love the catchy tune and the piano... Great singing as well... Wow, this is an earworm!
@davidsnyder Feb 2022
Really good song! I love the performance!! Good job!
@cubizm Feb 2022
Adorable! And the delivery so fitted to the spirit of the song.
@mrtylerlarson Feb 2022
oh my word! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! So catchy -and that bridge transition was so dramatic and tasteful! Freakin' brill!!!
@anthonykapfer666 Feb 2022
great song. catchy melodies and nice harmonies. well done!
@porrectus Feb 2022
Nice harmonies. Super happy tune. I like the switch up on the bridge. Really nice rhyming. Well done!