Feb 2022
inspiration was slipping out of my grasp
how to get out of feeling just so stuck
then i looked instead on the doing itself
and learned to focus on process not product
rags to riches or so they say
gwet out the way im gonna get it today
i dont play
got a game plan to grab the big haul
but i stall wonder whats the cause of it all
inspiration was slipping out of my grasp
how to get out of feeling just so stuck
then i looked instead on the doing itself
and learned to focus on process not product
mind on the doing being in motion
im coasting on the undertaking at hand
the movement of the body will land
your mentality state
towards executing a plan
inspiration was slipping out of my grasp
how to get out of feeling just so stuck
then i looked instead on the doing itself
and learned to focus on process not product
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
Interesting juxtaposition of a countryish band track with the rapped verses. I like the back and forth and I'm a big fan of process.
Thanks for making this skirmish happen.
@crutherford Feb 2022
i like the message here. also the chagnes from chorus to verse are very unexpected - which i am really into. i love a good surprise. thank you so much for organising this skirmish. it's my first one of the season and a great one to start with. my fav lines are:
mind on the doing being in motion
im coasting on the undertaking at hand
@tseaver Feb 2022
Nice write: the contrast between the two points of view drives the listener's interest. Fun sound bed behind the dialog, too.
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
Nice portrayal of a person in the optimistic stage of adopting a new theory and approach. The story illustrates how change can be tricky even if you start with a clear sense of how it is supposed to go. A nice story in song form!
@sheilerk Feb 2022
I really like how you change up the tempo and rhythm so much between verse and chorus. Great message for the moment!
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Hooky melody, very catchy :)
I think the message of this song could almost be the FAWM mantra !
@pattie Feb 2022
Great feel - I was immediately taken in by the guitars - loved the upbeat nature and oh my gosh the lyrics are so so true!!
@tunecat Feb 2022
What a cool track - loving the guitars doing their thing . The rapping is cool. Words ring true!!
@mardeycranbleson Feb 2022
Nicely done! I like the meandering matter of factness of the vocals.
@spazsquatch Feb 2022
No truer words. If the end result isn't something you don't want to go back to, just move onto the next thing.
@erbaer Feb 2022
I like the switch between the differing viewpoints. There's a good driving beat that keeps it all together and moving. Nicely done. And good prompt for a skirmish.