Grateful for any feedback. Thanks, if you take the time to listen. That means everything to me.
Well, wait. Let’s brace against our fate.
‘Cause face down somewhere
Yesterday’s moving on but
Wait. Let’s light up baby wait
Don’t chase those problems
‘Cause yesterday’s moving on
Let’s take this serious now
Let’s make delirious vows
These are the promises these are the hopes
The why’s!
Even the promise means I’m not alone
Inside
So wait. Get fingers in the paint
Let’s play like children
‘Cause yesterday’s moving on but
Wait, Let’s lighten up the weight
‘Cause face down somewhere
Yesterday’s moving on
@mattoxic Mar 2022
Nicely done. A really pretty song. Clever lyrics, I also appreciate the lines set up around "wait".
@kenmattsson Feb 2022
Really nice guitar playing, and nice how you set up the breaks from the vocals. I like the repeating "wait" motif in all the verses. Nice job.
@sheslin Feb 2022
Awesome guitar playing and nice to see some nylon string action! What a great song title. Wonderful guitar styling throughout to match what your lyrics needed. I liked how your dropped back on the 3rd verse. Really nice performance and song!