Feb 2022
Will very likely redo this when I have time - I think its just too dang slow and has a chord that needs removed..... Maybe I'll play with it more later.
Verse 1
She cries at night
Dying inside
She tries to hide
in a world of hurt and lies
CHORUS
a master, an expert
on Hidden Hurt
an authority, a veteran
of hidden hurt
Verse 2
What a sad smile
It can't disguise
the hurt inside
the hurt you see in her eyes
Verse 3
In her own mind
She's strong inside
As if her life
is two worlds at the same time
@misterdemp Feb 2022
Lovely portrait of one's inner and unshared sadness with an outward presentation of joy. Effective soulful song and pulls me in.
@billgcaldwell Feb 2022
Lovely voice! A soulful song . Could go a little quicker or maybe some riffs between the lyric breaks. All and all a very nice song.
@cabinmonster Feb 2022
Lovely, sad melody. Love the slight huskiness in your vocal. I could imagine Rod Stewart or Tom Petty singing this. Nice.