Feb 2022 s020622 skirmish songskirmish
10 minutes late but I had a mixing issue *bangs head on desk*
She says I'm not pretty
I should have stayed home
But she's staring at me
She can't be alone
I know that i"m not the kind of guy
She would normally see
Don't know what I did to catch her eye
Dont' know what I did but she's dancing with me
She says I'm not pretty
But I make her laugh
She says my clothes are shitty
Says I need another bath
I know that i"m not the kind of guy
She would normally see
Don't know what I did to catch her eye
Dont' know what I did but she's dancing with me
@gm7 Mar 2022
'Don't' know what I did but she's dancing with me"..great line.
great song for a skirmish...and that guitar riff is cool
@nicetrip Feb 2022
Nice groove, this song makes me moving. Well done!
@moonraccoon Feb 2022
Catchy, with a cool groove! I like how you leverage an arpeggio at the back end of the guitar melody. Nice bit of tension created in the solo, resolving with the melodic guitar passage.
@sw1n3flu Feb 2022
Chicks dig confidence? Maybe that’s it dude, pretty sidelined by charisma?
@mariekevinkmusic Feb 2022
Lots of people used this prompt to rail against the concept of "pretty". I like that. Particularly like the guitar riff on this.
@apolez3 Feb 2022
Enjoy the loud high pitched energized music... I bet if this guy listened to her took the bath got a new wardrobe and a haircut he'd be as pretty pretty as can be
@cicpisces Feb 2022
Funny lyrics. Love it when the underdog gets the girl. Nice melodic changes. Kept me interested. Good work.
@heliosonorous Feb 2022
Infectiously catchy and well crafted track!
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
The bass is delicious!! Really impressed with the whole song, excellent work for a skirmish.
@johnstaples Feb 2022
Wow T.C. you put together a mighty fine rocker for this skirmish! Nicely told story in the lyrics and some damn fine playing and singing! Really great work on this!
@aeye Feb 2022
Great riffs. this was a really fun rockin tune.
@bithprod Feb 2022
Cool riff, great guitar work. A really fun song.
@andygriff Feb 2022
Oh and the descending guitar going back to the original riff at the end is particularly sweet!
@andygriff Feb 2022
Ooh this is very good. Great guitar riff. Like the barbed lyric, seems a lot of have twisted the prompt, all good! :)
@stuartbenbow Feb 2022
Great groove, love the guitar fills. Some great lines in there too. Well worth the 10 minutes extra waiting time.
@artie Feb 2022
Rocking tune with a super catchy chorus. Great riff to tie it all together. Thoroughly enjoyed this!
@paulroe Feb 2022
Caught me off guard and then I caught my head bobbing. LOL. In the midst of the self flagellation is the saving grace, the one explicitly positive trait: Sense of humor. Works every time
@musicsongwriter Feb 2022
Very cool groovy take on the prompt. Rocking singing and playing.
@sunfire Feb 2022
Nice rock vibe. Good vocals and guitar. Enjoyed the listen.
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
This has some great guitarring. Relly nice lyric and delivery, but that guitar is the star for me. The closing pattern is brilliant - has a real unsettling quality. Excellent!
@keithcuts Feb 2022
lol this was a fun listen!
its got that under dog hero vibe that feeel good vibe and it works.
the lyrics had me thinking "she hates to be alone" . i can relate
guitar tone works for this rock jam.
solid work.
ps I dont remember many peoples old avatars but remember you pig lmao
@writeandwrong Feb 2022
Love the groove! Favorite line, "Dont' know what I did but she's dancing with me..." Love how you end it positvely, a bit of yin and yang work in here. Wow, excellent skirmish work!!!
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
This rocks! Love the fuzzy guitars and the reverb and string vocals! That is a really cool guitar riff!
And really cool descending guitar interlude before the ending riff.
Wonderful take on the prompt! Goes to show that what intrigues is about others is much more than superficial. Great song!
@tunecat Feb 2022
Very upbeat. Some great bass lines - busy!!! Respect
@arthurrossi Feb 2022
The intro is killer, absolutely LOVE it! What a great pop-rock-tune with this magic guitar groove! Beautiful lyrics and very successfully brought to life in a fantastic way!
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Nice lyric left open ended! Am i just a short term fill or what. Nice different lyric and of course i love that guitar through the scale. Nice one
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Ooh I love this ! Great dirty guitar sound, and love the breaks with the riff.
The lyrics are fun too, and clever.
@metalfoot Feb 2022
Lovely arpeggiated intro. Catchy rocking guitar groove to the track.
@chroes Feb 2022
These guitar riffs are bomb! And the melody has such a nice flow, very groovy and overall a piece I'd love to listen to when it's finished. One of my fav songs this FAWM so far!
@mikeskliar Feb 2022
nicely done- what a fun riff there, and the whole thing hangs together well! and it sounds great , mixing and production wise, - love that ending floating, sinking guitar solo, ha!
@pearlmanhattan Feb 2022
I love the guitar riff at the beginning - it's refreshing! Your lyrics are always so honest and straight forward. I enjoy the back and forth that she says one thing and does the opposite. Great guitar as usual! Excellent skirmish! Thank you!
@whispermouse Feb 2022
Always love hearing a full-on rock band arrangement for a skirmish! The "pretty/shitty" rhyme cracked me up. Nice skirmish!