Feb 2022 guitar
sunlight dances across my eyes
and i can see through the shades
birds are singing away
and theres a
breeze moving the leaves
of the trees they lean and they sway
its a beautiful day
and im feeling so grateful for all the
sights and sounds in the air
no matter the cold heat or damp
each days a pretty day to me
cuz youre still here
thunder rolls in the clouds are dark
windows shake in their frames
under the hard falling rain
and the howling growling wind
aproaching leaves debris in its wake
its a beautiful day
and im feeling so grateful for all the
sights and sounds in the air
no matter the cold heat or damp
each days a pretty day to me
cuz youre still here
@clownresidue Feb 2022
love the guitar and lyrics! super nice vibes!!
@paulroe Feb 2022
A standout stylistic device here is the way the lines drag into each other - gives a feeling of being propelled forward, in a slightly agitated manner. This works well here. Abandonment to the sensations of the natural world - not a bad respite from the world for a few moments on what I envision to be a morning stroll in spring time :-)
@spazsquatch Feb 2022
Very "dreamy" feel to the guitar that compliments the lyrics beautifully.
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
This has such a nice feel to it. It has a kinda Lou Reed feel, maybe? Something about the rhythm of the lines and the way that there are few pauses. I'm rambling. Anyway, it's a fantastic song and a super effort to have done that in the hour.
@apolez3 Feb 2022
I love your voice and how you sing this... the music is really good too !!!xoxo sweet lyrics as well.~
@chroes Feb 2022
Very nice lyrics, the song has a nice way of taking you with it...
@tcelliott Feb 2022
Ooh, this sounds good. You have some great imagery here. I like your chorus melody a lot.
separate note, I think if you delete everything after .mp3 in that link it should play on site. Maybe.
@writeandwrong Feb 2022
I love the verse structures as they help stir the emotions of a beauitful relationship forever evolving through thick and thin. Makes me think... "Don't sweat the small stuff." Wonderful performance! A++ work on the skirmish!
@metalfoot Feb 2022
Yes! "each day's a pretty day to me cuz you're still here" is a great hook to the chorus.
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Nice lyric and a lovely clean gentle delivery! Well played!
@johnstaples Feb 2022
This is a very pretty song! Lovely instrumentation and sincere, heartfelt vocals! Your lyrics are so positive and hopeful! Thanks, I needed this today!!!
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Sweet guitar picking, with a gentle flow to it :)
And such a pretty love song too. I enjoyed the listen, thank you.
@pearlmanhattan Feb 2022
I love the flow in your singing - the lyrics are so easy and natural sounding - enjoyed the listen! Great skirmish!
@sunfire Feb 2022
Easy to listen to. Nice vocals, guitar, and words. Enjoyed it.
@pattie Feb 2022
Wow I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE the guitar work!! Beautiful lyrics!! Well done!!
@mardeycranbleson Feb 2022
love the lilting sing-song delivery and meandering lyrics nice skirmish!