Too early morning for music, may do later.
Only 20 minutes so defaulted to a love song
V1 She's the loveliest of of creatures
She got the prettiest of features
Shes the one who makes my heart beat faster
Im not used to loving you
But I’m trying to see this through
So much more for me to master
C Pretty girl thx for choosing me
Pretty girl not sure what you see
But ill take it anyway
Pretty girl ill stay with you
Pretty girl you’ve made my life anew
Ill be with you everyday
V2 shes got a smile that makes we weak
Her moves are all so sleek
I still love to watch everything she does
She brings me up when i am down
She laughs when i play the clown
Everything she does gives me a buzz
C Pretty girl thx for choosing me
Pretty girl not sure what you see
But ill take it anyway
Pretty girl ill stay with you
Pretty girl you’ve made my life anew
Ill be with you everyday
B. To sum it up I’m happy now
And this i solemnly vow
To always be beside you
To stand by you everyday
To support you in every way
And always stay true
C Pretty girl thx for choosing me
Pretty girl not sure what you see
But ill take it anyway
Pretty girl ill stay with you
Pretty girl you’ve made my life anew
Ill be with you everyday
@paulroe Feb 2022
Straight up ballad of overwhelming love and gratitude. The lack of ambiguity is a strength, a sincerity. True affection creates a lens through which everything appears brighter - this sentiment is well documented here :-)
@johnstaples Feb 2022
And a quite lovely love song it is! These lyrics are overflowing with love and good feelings and affirmations! Well done John! Well done indeed!
@cicpisces Feb 2022
Nice love story. Great flow in the lyrics. I love the modest way you accept the love. You worked the prompt well. Nice.
@elesimo Feb 2022
"But ill take it anyway" is fun! A cute love story!
@keithcuts Feb 2022
such a classic vibe to this. reminds me of the longing songs of yester year. Nice to see new music harken back to that time.
Happy ending is a feel good vibe
nicely done
@musicsongwriter Feb 2022
Lovely lyrics. Hope to hear them too.
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
Very nice. Some great lines - I can totally relate to the "But ill take it anyway" line!
@mikeskliar Feb 2022
nicely done lyric- i like the rhyme scheme of the verses! impressive!
@apolez3 Feb 2022
"To sum it up I’m happy now
And this i solemnly vow
To always be beside you"
loved reading these lines
Nice Job~!
@chroes Feb 2022
Somehow the melody for this went in my head quite close to "pretty woman", and I think that's not a bad thing!
@debs Feb 2022
I can totally hear this as something upbeat with a lot of fun guitars and drums. I really like how you shift to "you" in the bridge. If it gets music'd let me know - I'd love to hear it.
@artie Feb 2022
Mmm the guy who, in the presence of a hot girl, forgets his own worth... Not sure if that was your take on it, or perhaps just pure gratefulness and appreciation, but either way, well done!
@odilongreen Feb 2022
I can "hear" this as a fun 50s/60s rock song -- the "everything she does gives me a buzz" in the second verse and the "thx for choosing me" in the chorus have such a wonderful innocence about them!
@corinnecurcio Feb 2022
Great work in a mere 20 minutes!
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
A classic love song, I look forward to hear it with some music. Great chorus, a little self deprecation but hey, who cares, you have the pretty girl.. as nicely summed up in the bridge... very nice
@arthurrossi Feb 2022
Such a sweet and beautifully crafted set of lyrics! I really enjoy the flow and the rhyme scheme in the verses. The chorus is killer and has so much potential to become an ear-worm... Wonderfully done!
@tcelliott Feb 2022
I like the change in perspective from verse to chorus. From third person to first, right? It works so damn well here. You've managed a lovely love song, not always the easiest to do.
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
I get it — a boy who’s been smitten and saying it every way he can think of. Fits that moment perfectly. Really well done.
@metalfoot Feb 2022
Ah, I see you went much the same lyrical direction as I did! Nice work.
@writeandwrong Feb 2022
Aww, this is so sweet and written with such sincerity!! Beautiful from beginning to end and hope to hear it set to music. Let me know!
@mardeycranbleson Feb 2022
With all this praise she is about to get a big head! Nicely done lyrics, great skirmish!
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Awww… you really did a nice job highlighting a lovely relationship. Flows well and should be a great song!
@tunecat Feb 2022
Reminiscent of pretty woman … like the sweet, uncomplicated relationship described
@sunfire Feb 2022
Would make a really good song. Enjoyed it.
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Good love songs are worth their weight in gold. This one is very romantic and sweet (and yes, pretty too).
Please let me know if this gets musicated :)
@pearlmanhattan Feb 2022
awww! I love this! Simple innocent love song - well written! Great skirmish!
@whispermouse Feb 2022
Can't go wrong with a love song. I could see this one working out with a James Taylor treatment. Nice write!
@andygriff Feb 2022
It's 9pm here in Blighty! Nice words - I'm envious of people who can write pure love songs like this!