Could this be a miniopera? Mipera?
After two days I did finally managed to record the melody for this one.
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Endless Gray
Endless occasions of night operations I warn you this line never ends
Heading for chaos perhaps even pathos what is this about what it sends
My mind is futile my mind is so stupid it easily breaks and it bends
Longing for harmony longing for armory missing all departed friends
I’m seeing
Gray and gray and gray and gray the terrible sickness of gray
I’m feeling
Gray and gray and gray and gray the horrible dullness of day
Screaming and trembling my brain is assembling the last couple cells that hold air
Trying to take a step without a friend to help not even moving a hair
My body aching and my body shaking all lonely and naked and bare
Longing for kindness and longing for sweetness hoping for someone to care
I’m seeing
Gray and gray and gray and gray the terrible sickness of gray
I’m feeling
Gray and gray and gray and gray the horrible dullness of day
@leka Feb 2022
Very good and relatable lyrics. Rhythm and flow works.
@yam655 Feb 2022
If you have a melody you should make sure you record it (even just on your phone) so it doesn't get lost.
It feels windy to me. But it may be when I think of endless grey I think of tornadoes and the like.
It's possible to do acapella over environmental soundscape and avoid instruments while still having a backing track. In the era of "art projects made while in quarantine" these sorts of things are far less unusual than they would have been a few years ago.