I got lucky with the rain and birds outside.
I want to feel like I’m trying
Tell me it’s worth it, please do
I’ll kick up the dust again
Tears in my eyes again
Quieter this time, it’s true
Live in desire but intentions will not get you through
No way to the path, ‘cause I just never saw what they knew
I’m tied to the stake and I’m drowning
Lie and tell me it’s worth it, please do
Faith in the self and I’m
Resting in crowds again
What would I do if I knew
Trying to bleed but I bled all of that blood away
Fingers dug deep but the memory’s starting to fray
@clownresidue Feb 2022
i love the lyrics and the chord progression you used. they go together so beautifully! the ambience of nature is such a nice addition too :)
@speed0doyle Feb 2022
Wow, you really captured a great performance of this beautiful song
@dianaviney Feb 2022
I believe you've found the path. That refrain on the Piano is gorgeous.
Your voice is beautiful, and I believe many of us can connect to your lyrics. This thing called life is hard, so glad your here.
@kembole Feb 2022
I love the feel of this. The ambient sounds made it feel like a part of a movie. Keep it coming!
Just curious, what is your idea behind the lyrics?
Fun fact: On the part near the end(Fingers dug deep but the memory’s starting to fray) is kinda close to a finnish classical christmas song called Tulkoon joulu. You might not hear it but it's etched in our dna so it's easy to notice.
@greengrassgirl Feb 2022
Wonderful, intimate, whispery vocal! The music is suitably haunting. I like this!