So some lyrics to. Just message me if you want to collab.
She is living in the shadow
Underneath the darkest star
outside look so young and sweet
but her soul is old
She have noone to hold
So much fear within her heart
Theres nowhere to run
Bombs and shooting in behind
She can not feel the sun
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Her journey took an eternity
Trough oceans and burning sand
Scars are painted everywhere
By the evil hand
Now she can barley stand
So much fear within her heart
Theres nowhere to run
Bombs and shooting in behind
She can not feel the sun
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
She´s now stand here alone
Facing the evils face
“You will not be welcome here”
The invisible choir say
“No go away just go away”
So much fear within her heart
Theres nowhere to run
Bombs and shooting in behind
She can not feel the sun
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
Run you girl, run so fast run through day and night
@arthurrossi Feb 2022
Very nicely written and intense lyrics. It sounds like the story of a refugee who run away from a war, but is not safe yet (and probably will never be as the "Scars are painted everywhere / By the evil hand". The chorus will be very effective once put to music. Great work here!
@roddy Feb 2022
I think this is very good. After the verses which are very strong , the chorus jumps out with powerful intensity . A very sad story and you tell it very well.
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
This lyric really is powerful and the repetition in the chorus drives home the urgency and intensity.
@marijequerida Feb 2022
Your lyrics really make me feel the pain of the antagonist and there's such power in that. Please let me know when it gets music.
@cindyrella Feb 2022
Oh gosh, this in intense and I felt like I was running too. Brilliant!
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Powerful song , strong chorus. Nice imagery.