Whew - after much needed attention to hardware and software - here it is - a little rough - hubby came home and fell asleep and started snoring while I was recording LOL....
V
Took time with my makeup
wore my new dress
sporting a new haircut
Hope to impress
Ch
Why are you
so cold to me
when I'm so
hot hot hot for you
You're so cold to me
but I'm so
hot hot hot for you
V
As though I don't exist
you ignore me
pretend like you don't care
you don't see me
V
I don't know what happened
why did you quit
was it something I said
or something I did
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
The anxious attention of the story jumps out in the listening. The steady chords and earnest vocal delivery tell me that this is tension that goes on and on.
@musicsongwriter Feb 2022
Beautiful song, very loving and irresistible. I think if it was in a movie, the person it was sang to would come respond in a beautiful romantic way. You have a gorgeous voice. Your song is hypnotising and hot, hot, hot is such a great way of expressing love. Wonderful listen.
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
Unrequited love, nicely written and performed. The repetitive ‘hot’ really emphasises the contrast of the other person being cold. Really nice.
@misterdemp Feb 2022
An effective take on relationships and their troubles.
@andrea Feb 2022
He's not worth the trouble - haha. I like your take on the prompt. The chorus is catchy. I look forward to hearing this with music.
@markg Feb 2022
Thinking the Rolling Stones' "I'm so hot for her."
I like lyrics like your first verse that set the scene with specifics.
@vivalarayna Feb 2022
Oh, the age old hot and cold. Ditch 'em! Sorry to hear you equipment is being uncooperative. I'll check back to see if you add a demo!
@tjeff Feb 2022
Good take on the prompt, I can relate to the idea of people in a relationship being hot or cold towards each other. Excellent chorus.
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Love that hot and cold dichotomy in a relationship. Will be a catchy chorus with the built in rhythm of the words.
@berni1954 Feb 2022
Good idea the old incompatible couples theme for this prompt.
I look forward to hearing the recording. Good luck with the technical problems.