On a roll doing a similar treatment. Its electronic backing track (created in real time) with lyrcs recorded in real time.. No "proper" recording. No voice. If you hate it... please feel free to say so.. I'm experimenting.
Just waiting for the video to upload.
Dust
Dust
Busted out of the bag
Spilt
Carpet
Infused with
Time
With
Debris
All things past
Unwanted
Unwashed
Un……,..
Spilt
Like milk
Like sand
Emptied
Now infusing
Reality tainted with what should be
Gone!
Wrong!
Unpleasant
Euuuew
We turn our petite noses up and indicate
Disgust
At this
…..
Dust.
A pile lies there
How can we remove its trace ?
A disgrace
Every fibre touched
The fronds picking up that
Which we’d like to
Negate
Not hesitate
To
Return to whence they’ve from .
The messiness of life with its
Bothersomeness
The complex interaction of things
Not only
Us!
The microscopic nature of
Bits coming through channels
Creating fuss!!
We sneeze and scratch
We itch
Just at the thought of
It being
Thus!!!
Yeah dust.
Yeah dust!!
Well that’s what I came up with….
@jayjay Feb 2022
Great lyrics The music is saying dust to me. Would love hear it with vocals too #tit4tat
@pippa Feb 2022
Way to go! What a fascinating way to build music. I'd like to hear the lyrics with the music, but this definitely works as it is. Yeah dust!
@scubed Feb 2022
Fascinating! Watching the video unfold - and then suddenly hearing the cool funky music start up - was really fun. The lyrics read like poetry - as I read them, I imagined them being read aloud with the music in the background. Thanks for doing the skirmish!
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
In the lyrics, it’s a specific mishap and a universal experience at the same time. We don’t necessarily know what to do, so we start off by complaining. The music turns into something in a few minutes. It’s a sound palette that goes well together.
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
Chaotic and wild lyrics. The music has that 80's synth sound. Crazy stuff. I'd love to here the lyrics with the music - such a mad affair - Yeah Dust!!
@mikehex Feb 2022
Captures the messiness and chaos of life... almost feels like a celebration of disorder. "Yeah dust!" Nice write
@tjeff Feb 2022
Interesting stream of consciousness writing. I think it would be great with one of your electronic compositions.
@andygriff Feb 2022
I like this stream of consciousness way of doing it... Looking forward to hearing the track once it uploads.
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Punchy stream of consciousness feel that will work well with electronic music I think
@tcelliott Feb 2022
This looks like two lyrics, but works as one. I really like the short lines of the first half. Simple and eloquent in the images it conjures.