2nd track. I put aside some time to put this one together tonight. Fairly happy with this one as I feel like it a catchy number that came together without much effort
Holy hell
Body like buddha
A mind like a piece of crap
A soul so pure it smells like manure
Have you had enough of that
Mikes really handy but he’s had enough of Candy
Telling him he’s just like that
Holy hell
What the holy hell
Can’t you tell
You’re in holy hell
Holy hell
In my holy hell
Holy hell
What the holy hell
I wish i could have
Ran away before it came to that
I was told to endure and elways take the fall
Until you feel like a piece of crap
Sometime she makes me randy despite hard constant nagging
Telling me I’m a hooligan
@simonwaldram Feb 2022
Catchy and caustic. Really like that nagging riff. It tells the story of the song almost as much as the words.
@srcoops Feb 2022
Interesting lyrics and nice musical presentation.
@wolfkier Feb 2022
ha! This is great. Loving on the chorus and the attraction/repulsion lyric. hooooooligan is worth the price of admission on it's own. LOL.
Well done.
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Thanks for your visit and kind words, my friend. Great to see you here posting this month. Hugs to the kids too!
@theodamus Feb 2022
Ooooof this hits very particularly. Your lyrics are so plain and direct, and that less-is-more bluntness paints such a good picture of a toxic relationship, insidious enough to have you consumed and turned around before you really realise where you have ended up. That sneaky up and down riff in the background is unsettling in a great way. This is another jam, I love it