Thinking out of the box on this first Skirmish of 2022... trying some white-girl rap... no rhymes, or too many? This was fun.
I just posted a longer version here, than the one I submitted earlier for the skirmish.
Box it up, wipe it up, shine it up, clean it up, move it up, tub it up, bag it up, shelve it up
Neaten, straighten, lighten, brighten, whiten, tighten, flatten, heighten
pretty, fancy, styling, beguiling, stunning, sparkling, dazzling, snazzy
mowing, sewing, bowing, showing,
shining, mending, lending, trending.
flushing, brushing, trimming, pinning,
finding, plugging, steaming, de-bugging
mop up, get up, set up, fed up! tie up, hang up, layout, stay out!
track it, trim it, pin it, fight it,
Hook it, tack it, set it, forget it,
flat it, pat it, erect it, protect it,
crate it, plate it, trap it, truck it.
set right, get right, play right, stay tight, re-light, rewrite, delight, all night!
blow up, glow up, flow up, grow up.
foam it, comb it, brand new home-it.
strike it, like it, ship it, whip it,
tag it, flag it, double bag it.
scrub it, rub it, trash it, stash it
tip it, flip it, flap it, clap it,
trap it, trip it, cart it, start it,
tie it, bag it, bleach it, reach it
dye it, try it, DIY it!
@mahtowin Apr 2022
Cool!
@roblincoln Feb 2022
Wish I could figure out how to rap. It is skill set I do not have. You do a great job on this! Cool production too!
@didib Feb 2022
Brilliant, love this! It's making me want to Marie Condo everything...
@winchperry Feb 2022
Yeah, these days I'm focusing my writing on songs that are suitable for synch licensing (mainly ads and tv) so I think this would do well for retail.
@cubizm Feb 2022
Wow! Fun Christine! The drum machine is giving you a new approach. This really is a lot of fun.
@mightyq Feb 2022
I enjoyed this! It makes me think I should tidy up around here.
@dzdandcunfsd Feb 2022
I'm glad you said it! It doesn't get much more suburban white girl rap than this :D That being said I did really enjoy it though. I would watch this HGTV show LOL. Dropping verbs all over the place! I don't think its too much at all.
@mikehex Feb 2022
Wild explosion of activity that doesn't let up for a second. I want you in my start up
@metalfoot Feb 2022
I love the way you let it fly! Drop those verbs!
@dock Feb 2022
the juxtaposition of all these phrases does something more, it creates a synergy/synopsis of life. Very cool!
@kenmattsson Feb 2022
This is so creative! We both got very out of our comfort zones. I think there was something in the air, as so many people did.
I love the rhymes and your choices are words really took the prompt and sucked everything out of it. Really good skirmish!
@liz561 Feb 2022
This sounds really like a throwback from the 90s! Really fun vibe.