Feb 2022
I thought this was naturally the AABB structure, but as I wrote the bridge, it seemed more like a chorus. Hmm...if someone hears music for this, maybe it'll naturally resolve itself? Not sure how to sort that out...
Bandybum created music/vocals for this lyric. Listen here: https://fawm.org/songs/133177/
Curves
Behind me
Is a whirlwind of hope
A young heart at the wheel
Out circling the globe
Behind me
Is a version of truth
All the best stories drift
Like a helium balloon
[ch or br]
I smile at my best moments
And even at my worst
I journey thru it all
When life throws me a curve
Times change and people do too
And some things hit a nerve
But I’ve got an appetite
For life’s twists and turns
Ahead of me
There’s a tunnel of dreams
I plan to greet each one
As they float on the breeze
Ahead of me
I will flirt with adventure
Passion and desire
Are my legal tender
Repeat ch/br
©2022 Kristi McKeever
@wolfkier Feb 2022
What a great idea, taking those curves with the momentum and relish. Positive energy and nothing can stop you! :)
@gwyn1234 Feb 2022
Really well written words...love the positiveness!
@katestantonsings Feb 2022
This lyric is lovely and uplifting. I'm looking forward to hearing the song!
@cindyrella Feb 2022
Wonderful vivid writing Kristi! Live the flow and it sure sings off the page!
@tamsnumber4 Feb 2022
Passion and desire
Are my legal tender
great
Awesome write, love the rhythm of this and your rhyming is amazing in that chorus, girl...you got it goin on!!!
@bandybum Feb 2022
Ooo I like this one a lot! Nice vibes looking backwards and forwards.
May I have a go with some music? Would likely be the last week of FAWM, as pretty hectic schedule already :)