Skirmish, had fun with harmonies, the rhythmic disjointedness was absolutely intentional.
I’m in balance, going with the flow
Though the flow don’t know where it go
The Yin, the yang, nirvana and pooh
What the hells a matter with you
I’m in balance, yeah that's right
Got everything figured, every night
Everythings tidy, it’s all in God’s plan
I’m by the river in a nice little van
I’m in balance, everything is chill
What do you take me for a shill
My positive vibes are just peachy keen
Settle down and you’ll see what I mean
I’m in balance, oh yeah, for sure
Though my sarcasm is a bit immature
The lesson that I’m going to take from here
My balance will be found with another beer
@theodamus Feb 2022
Woooow this was cool then those little ooh ooohs came it and my ears hit the roof I love it, and those even triplets yesss. Super good take on the theme, and great result!
@erbaer Feb 2022
This is so good! I like the sparse landscape... the bass bouncing along... the robotic sounding harmonies.
@chickenjail Feb 2022
Cool production! And I'll join you on that beer!
@scubed Feb 2022
Wonderful lyrics and trippy music - very interesting and very cool! Great skirmishing!
@pianoquest Feb 2022
Yay, van down by the river! Fun to hear electronic and folk musical elements mixed together.
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
some great ideas and concepts and it all holds together well, the harmonies star and that compelling backline is great - top skirmish
@vivalarayna Feb 2022
"My balance will be found with another beer" - famous last words! The disjointedness is a nice contrast to the prompt and tongue-in-cheek lyrics.
@kevinmason Feb 2022
I love the reference to (I think) the Tao of Pooh. This is pretty hilarious, ironic, and insightful. The backing music is so enjoyable as well!
@andygetch Feb 2022
Interesting angle on the prompt. The 'disjointedness' in the music certainly supports the lyric.
@mikehex Feb 2022
Love everything about this! The beat, the harmonies, living in a van down by the river... everything!
@keithcuts Feb 2022
i like the flow and freedom you employ.
Sounds all sound good
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@darcistrutt Feb 2022
Your harmonies are great. I love how it's bouncing around in my headphones. The timing of the sarcasm line was fun. Nice write!