Skirmish theme: meeting. Just lyrics this time.
I hate to drop a story and leave it on a cliffhanger, but I honestly don't know what happens next.
Update 2/10: I wrote music for this song. Slow, languid dream pop.
She said, I guess you’re here for the secret meeting
It’s every full moon in a new location
It was smart to come early for front row seating
It’s a beautiful night for a celebration
I said, I’m just watching for the meteor shower
Streaks of light from the rocks in space
It’s supposed to be best in the midnight hour
That’s why I’m here in this cool dark place
I said, I didn’t even know about a secret meeting
She said, Fate brought you to this location
Now you’re gonna have to stay for the secret meeting
And go through the secret initiation
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
I'm hooked on your story as far as it goes. I hope you'll let us all know as it develops.
Thanks for coming out to play.
@wobbiewobbit Feb 2022
haha sounds like you did the same as me and followed it line by line, i nearly ended mine by coming clean and saying i don't know what she did. but then the end just plopped out. your lyrics are very intriguing and the sense of not knowing what is going on really echoes
@andygetch Feb 2022
Reminds me of a time or two when I stumbled into a room where I knew not what was happening. Perhaps another song happens next?
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
Oh, yeah, look at that, another meteor placement at a meeting. And an element of fate too! Besides that, it’s quite a feat to put a whole story in a 12-line song. I like the irony in the other character imagining that someone would have learned the secret location. That seems like it fits the current era where it seems unchecked assumptions are happening as a matter of routine.
@cabinmonster Feb 2022
very intriguing! I got little tingles up my back at the end. Part of would love to hear the rest of the story, but I also love how it keeps the audience hanging!
@nancyrost Feb 2022
Ooh, intriguing. I like the way you set the scene, especially with the meteor shower.
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Oh the secret initiation - not sure if this is exciting or scary! Good lyric made me read and think!
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
Ah, the story where you can make your own ending. A nice plot developing. I liked "'your" innocence in being at that place...
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Ohhh a cliff hanger ! You will just HAVE to let me know when the resolution appears !!!!
It defo makes the reader/listener want to hear more, to know more, so does it's job really well.
@melaniepegge Feb 2022
Oh I love this! Mysterious and magical.
@musicsongwriter Feb 2022
Wow, I think we both thought about the moon :) Lovely lyrics. Very interesting to read.