Feb 2022 squirmish needs-music ss020422a superskirmish burn
Skirmish and the prompt was burn.
The Match
I wanna take the next step
Move on from this spot
I wanna embrace the mood
I want more than we’ve got
There’s a match in my hand
That I’ll strike when I can
To ignite the passion in our souls
A fire that’ll burn in our lives
To give us that feeling of being more whole
I wanna throw you right down
Watch me climb on top
I wanna enjoy pleasure
I won’t know when to stop
There’s a match in my hand
That I’ll strike when I can
To ignite the passion in our souls
A fire that’ll burn in our lives
To give us that feeling of being more whole
I wanna lose all the fear
Just give this a go
I wanna embrace the risk
I really want to blow
There’s a match in my hand
That I’ll strike when I can
To ignite the passion in our souls
A fire that’ll burn in our lives
To give us that feeling of being more whole
@wacha Feb 2022
This is a really nice set of lyrics, you've captured passion very well. Nice skirmishing!
@pearlmanhattan Feb 2022
Love the line "there's a match in my hand that I'll strike when I can" - raw and direct, lyrics convey the longing/burning. Good skirmish! double points for a capella recording!
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
Deep feelings you convey here. Strike up the band and put some powerful music behind it. Nice work.
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
I look forward to hearing this with full music.
I think my fav line is "A fire that’ll burn in our lives", as it brings a sense of long lived passion rather than just a fleeting thing.
@andygriff Feb 2022
Nice one. I like the positivity here, I went the darker route
@andygriff Feb 2022
Oh poo sorry the page wasn't loading properly for me so i thought it was just lyrics. Listening now!
@unknownbecky Feb 2022
There's something really powerfully ominous about this—such an impressive way of conveying a mood. I'd be really interested to hear what you would do with chords underneath it; I wonder if you'd lean into the ominousness or take it in a different direction entirely.
@vivalarayna Feb 2022
Nice take on the prompt! I really like the "lose the fear/embrace the risk" lyrics. You used the "burn" theme so well throughout this.
@andygriff Feb 2022
Ooh I like this, well done! Are you planning to put a tune to it?
@nateger Feb 2022
Nice take on the prompt! I like the double meaning of match. The refrain is very sweet - a lovely love song!