Feb 2022 female vocal electronic sultry pop
Im learning logic and had no idea had to produce this idea. At least I finished the damn song. I had this idea for 2 years now. Obviously I'm not a producer. Not happy right now, but i am happy I got through one song. Truthfully Im totally embarrassed at not being able to produce. I just dont hear arrangements, and im taking production classes.
Take me to the woods
Love me like I should be loved
Take ne to the woods
Love me like I should be loved
I wanna hear the wolves cry
I wanna see the eagles fly
Put my feet in the dirt
Cuz I dont feel the hurt anymore
And I never asked a soul
what im asking here of you
I know that you teach me what i never learned in school
a a a lets get it together
a few bucks and a swear
ill go get the star you and me true love art stars
so take me to the woods
you know what to do
take me to the woods
love me like I should be should be loved
I was all but dead until now
adn my veins have come alive
to be painted by your hands
in the way you understand my colors
cuz I dont give a fuck about
anything Ive ever wanted
a a a lets get it together
a a a a little cash and a swear
ill go get the star you and me true love art stars
so take me to the woods
you know what to do
take me to the woods
love me like I should be should be loved
you told me to run run run
But I know you didnt really mean it
so hurry up before its gone
and all I have left is healing
so heal me heal me heal me
so take me to the woods
you know what to do
take me to the woods
love me like I should be should be loved
I wanna hear the wolves cry
@dorit Feb 2022
Thank you guys so much. I only put in the synth so I could lay something down. I dont know how to produce it, and just laid it down for now.
@mmmmarcus Feb 2022
Love the vibe. Kinda of a darker Taylor Swift thing (I mean that as a compliment). You're such a talented vocalist, and it's cool to hear you do this kind of softer singing.
I think you can amp up the volume for the synth and drums, music is a bit in the background now.
Ending a bit abrupt perhaps.
Very inspiring stuff. Keep em coming, I wanna hear more stuff from you this February!
@johnstaples Feb 2022
So, lemme start by saying, this is beautiful! The production feels minimal and that let's your lovely vocals shine even brighter! "Take me to the woods" is a really sweet hook and your lyrics deliver with alluring imagery!
Sure, you could continue production and amp this up but this is FAWM and your song is beautiful!
@zeekle1998 Feb 2022
The vocals and melody are really nice. I struggled to hear the synth but practice makes perfect. Lyrics are great, evocative and the way you sing them brings out the passion. Brilliant.
@grenzgaengerin Feb 2022
The text inspires me - very emotionally.