did i make it?
did i get the kick?
oh shit i missed
(maybe) i should've been someone else
let it play out
the fantasy
don't wake me from my dream
hold on i'm trying to get it back
if i can fall back asleep in less than a minute
i'll be right back there
maybe i can make it this time
if i just adjust a little bit
who am i kidding i don't know what i'm doing at all
and it happens all the time
every december
and your brick through my window
that one i knew was coming
you got me the first time
but even though i refused to prepare
i knew it was coming
i feel like that should count for something
@dabirks Feb 2022
Another great one. I love the urgency that both the guitar and vocal delivery create. There’s definitely an honesty in your writing that shines through your emotions in your voice. Special stuff!
@jorgevallentine Feb 2022
Cool riff, great use of pauses, and nice driving rhythm. Lots of the same tools I love to use myself. I dig it!
@circle Feb 2022
great riff - immediately I could already hear it as a full production with drums and electric guitar. love the energy in the performance, and the vocals are delivered with real vigour and feeling
@splittybooms Feb 2022
Really liking the melodies on the "and your brick through my window..." sections - that's the kind of melodic feel that drew me to indie rock back when I first explored the genre. This whole thing has great catchy melodies. My ears are always looking for something to grab onto like that little descending riff you play on the guitars like at 1:27 and throughout (ah you do more variations of it in the end section) - its such a small thing but I really dig it.
Yeah man my head was swaying back and forth the whole time as I type.
This would have definitely been one that went into my library back when I was learning about Coldplay, John Mayer, Keane, etc.
Makes me want to delve back into the genre again.
@atam94 Feb 2022
I love the little riff part in between the strumming. Lots of emotion in your voice and guitar performance. I'm digging it!
@valeriecox Feb 2022
That driving guitar and passionate vocal is great! I love that line about trying to go back to sleep to capture that magical dream. I don’t know what some of the other lines even mean, but I don’t care. December? Anyway, this this is exactly the kind of song that goes on my playlist all the time. Love this!