Feb 2022 acoustic-one-take guy-with-guitar indie
Alright, first song done! I'm honestly not a huge fan of this one tbh. The lyrics could be better and my voice still needs some work, but I think it turned out good enough
Fumble in the dark
Creeping sense of dread
Trapped down in the depths
I’m as good as dead
Search for a way out
Try and fail to swallow my fear
The walls are closing in
But I’m not gonna die in here
Grip the weathered walls
I’m running out of time
As my palms start to sweat
I begin the climb
Search for a way out
Try and fail to swallow my fear
The walls are closing in
But I’m not gonna die in here
Clawing my way out
On my hands and knees
Never stop to rest
Until I break free
Search for a way out
Try and fail to swallow my fear
The walls are closing in
But I’m not gonna die in here
@franniezest Feb 2022
Great imagery in your lyrics and the sound of the song goes well with that vibe. I really liked the song!
@valeriecox Feb 2022
I think you’ve done a good job of making it sound ominous as the lyrics. The downstrokes on the guitar really work in that sense and also just sound cool. :)