Feb 2022
Every song has a beginning
And every song has an end
It can have a melody that twists and turns
But it always has a place to land
Sometimes, I wish life could be that easy
Every rhythm has an explanation waiting
Even when it's difficult to find
It may not always fit so easily in its place
But it always has a place to belong
Sometimes, I wish I was a rhythm
Sometimes, I wish life could be as easy as a song
And a song it's allowed to be quiet if it wants
And a song can say nothing at all
And a song can be powerful or sensitive
Without the expectation of being pretty
Sometimes, I wish life could be that easy
Sometimes, I wish I was a song
@stuartbenbow Feb 2022
Love the imagery, and the contrast between life and a tune. Great write, and I agree, I wish life could be that easy too.
@jorh Feb 2022
The metaphor is a work of genius - when the refrain hit it made me want to read all the previous lines in the verse to see how clever the comparison was. You voice is very calming and smooth as well, worked perfectly with the message
@lissielou79 Feb 2022
I absolutely so glad I come across this song. I love the concept, you voice & the ukulele. Sounds really grounded and pure. Nice one. I can't wait to hear what you do next.
@majordanby Feb 2022
This is pretty and I like the words and sentiment. I especially like the last lines and how you deliver them.
The big bit at the end fits the lyrics which is clever. Nice one.
@bootlegger Feb 2022
I love the way you sing this. Feels effortless. Really neat tune. I love that melody for the sometimes... Lines.
@resonut123 Feb 2022
Yes, sometimes I wish too.
Nice strummy uke and strong vocals. So glad to hear you again!
@metalfoot Feb 2022
Absolutely I wish life could be that easy.
What a great chord structure and melody to go with the deeply relatable lyrics. Two thumbs up!