Feb 2022 demo acoustic lofi emo
damn dude
i thought i lost you for a minute
i kept it together
most of the day
right after i put her down i sobbed for half an hour
i wanted to call everyone i know
tell them all i don't know what to do
but i know what i need to do
i just have to keep going
i know you can't promise tomorrow all the time
but i also know you'll try
i love that you're still here
i hope you stick around awhile
@nancyrost Mar 2022
I like how the drone of the guitar in the verses breaks into those big pretty chords. A personal sound, great dynamics.
@bradbrubaker Feb 2022
Cool how the final stanza brings it all into focus. That first line in that stanza is a killer line. The guitars toward the end sound like the heavy legs of someone trying to live through another day.
@fuzzy Feb 2022
Super great guitar work here.
I'm loving the repetition.
Nice emotive vocals for sure.
Good job!
@atam94 Feb 2022
I loved the guitar work. It suits your singing in this one really well. Lots of emotion in your voice, I like the "I just have to keep going" part a lot
@williamjames Feb 2022
Very cool singing! The guitar riff is very hypnotic... This hits the feels hard!
@skyezor Feb 2022
whooosh! this is a gut punch! gorgeous and palpable emotion
@spikedirection Feb 2022
... fuck me, that's pretty devastating. I dunno if this is from experience but it sure sounds like it, raw and vulnerable. And its also beautiful. Very well done!