It's nice to upload my first song for FAWM! This is something I feel I've been going through this past few years. I can already hear a few edits in this lol
Verse 1
Your world starts crashing down
Can’t explain your tortured heart
Feeling lost, confused, detached & used
You don't know where to start
Everything you once believed in
Has been ripped & torn apart
Feel the air of despair, hold on tight
to your transforming heart
Chorus
Wake up!
To the power within
Wake up!
This is no coincidence
Wake up!
Spiritual Awakening
Wake up!
This is no coincidence
Verse 2
There is no escaping
Darkest hours of your soul
Thought parasites
Take control of your mind
And you want to let go
Suddenly, the light shines through
You look for something new
Blindfold comes off, the ties unfold
Your flowers bloom
Repeat chorus
Bridge
Align to your truth
Live in harmony
Any constructive feedback would be greatly received. I feel like there will be a few edits already. Overall it's a good start.
@tukayandryan Feb 2022
Lovely to find you here! Positive message here which is awesome! Contrast between the verse and chorus is great.
@jessicamoon Feb 2022
I also loved this melody, it really carries your awesome message!
@serene123 Feb 2022
Hi Lisa! Lovely positive uplifting song
@richaaaay Feb 2022
Beautiful singing. Quite liked the end of the video. Just a friendly finish to it all.
@jtsteam Feb 2022
I like the way all the parts contrast here, and especially how the feel changes when the chorus comes in. I can imagine an arrangement where it starts quiet and builds to a crescendo with the repeated "Wake up" at the end.
@tuesdaygray Feb 2022
Really cool song, I love the melody! The contrast between the verses and the choruses is awesome, makes the chorus feel power!