Feb 2022 demo acoustic lofi emo
fire on the lawn
like a drunk left alone too long
should've paid more attention
to all those sticks that you put in
you could've kept it in
instead you didn't
i didn't have to know
i could've lived without (it)
passed out and face down
did anyone see me like that?
i'd probably rather a fire
honestly
i could've just went in
instead i didn't
they didn't have to know
they could've lived without (it)
@sailingmagpie Feb 2022
Nice opening couplet. It really grabs the listener and pulls them into the song. Love that little slide down at the end of each repetition of the chord sequence.
@sheilerk Feb 2022
Intriguing lyrics. The title drew me to it, and now I find myself wanting to know more about the singer and the situation. Well done!
@ductapeguy Feb 2022
The lonely despair is palpable in every element, lyrics, vox, and guitar.
@beatsbycamel Feb 2022
such a nice dark vibe, i love it!