Feb 2022 collab songfromlyric godihopeitdoesntsuck smileyface
Collab with Geoff61 who provided the fantastic lyric. Very very demo state.
By the by...what is a watchlist?
I WOULDN’T TAKE YOU BACK NOW
VERSE
I guess that you caught me
Like a fish on a line
You made me feel special
Well most of the time
You made me feel wanted
You made me feel good
A subtle illusion
That I misunderstood
PRE-CHORUS
But it’s over
CHORUS
I wouldn’t take you back now
You’re such a ball and chain
I wouldn’t take you back now
You’re like a feeble hurricane
I wouldn’t take you back now
Not on your bended knee
To take these staves away
That you stuck right into me
You’re a watered down potent brew
And we’re through.
VERSE
You toyed and you played me
In your favourite game
You took me as railtracks
While you were the train
You twisted the truth
And you made up the lies
You taught me the meaning
Of misogynize (spoken as miss-ogen-eyes)
MIDDLE
Broken words, starry skies
Subtle were, your alibi’s
You thought it clever
Thought it wise
But I saw right through
Your thin disguise
You are stupid to me now
Anyhow
PRE-CHORUS
And it’s over
CHORUS
I wouldn’t take you back now
You’re such a ball and chain
I wouldn’t take you back now
You’re like a feeble hurricane
I wouldn’t take you back now
Not on your bended knee
To take these staves away
That you stuck right into me
You’re a watered down potent brew
And we’re through.
@andrea Feb 2022
There is some great wordplay here. I love the attitude in the vocals - just perfect. I look forward to the full version.
@doggolito Feb 2022
Love the keys you have going and the chords progression. And solid drums (love their sound too)
I'd love to see where you can take it when FAWM is over because I'm really digging this raw version
@robcrusade Feb 2022
Figured it out. Done.
@geoff61 Feb 2022
don't forget to edit the post and add me as a collaborator :-)
@geoff61 Feb 2022
You did a great job with a complicated lyric (never easy with me, sorry about that)