I was riding my bike across a bridge
Thinking about Romeo and Juliet
Romeo's friend died in a duel
And Romeo's revenge got him banished, you bet
Sitting on a train writing songs
I ended up in Tennessee
Hello Pigeon Forge and Dollywood
Songs are sung here that set you free
When I caught the train I was late
And my bicycle took up a seat
I had a crumpet and a hot cross bun
Lemondade to beat the heat, and put up my feet
Sitting on a train writing songs
I ended up in Tennessee
Hello Pigeon Forge and Dollywood
Songs are sung here in that set you free
It was hot as we crossed the trestle
The train was doing mighty fast time
We almost flipped on a curve into a ravine
Just like the Old Ninety-Nine
Sitting on a train writing songs
I ended up in Tennessee
Hello Pigeon Forge and Dollywood
Songs are sung here that set you free
Songs are sung here in ev'ry key
Songs are sung here eternally
@gammafied Feb 2022
Nice storytelling. I can imagine you doing subtle sound effects like a train whistle that would add to the atmosphere. I like the last verse.
@lcad Feb 2022
This has great flow, seems like it would fit pretty seamlessly to some music.