Feb 2022
Something simple to get started. Honestly the first song I've sat down and finished in any sort of fashion in...a while. So feels good. Happy FAWM and good luck to all.
Please don't disappear
I love just to have you near
Every time you come here
I start to feel its sincere
I wake up in the morning
to coffee and your calling
You're sayin come here
I start to feel its sincere
So I'm writing you a love song
Strange to do because I say it to you
But long over due cuz
Writing love songs is what I do
Evenings wishing the snow
Will keep us in bed alone
So we don't have to say come here
The look in your eyes is so sincere
Right now everything's enough
But I'm worried I'll fuck it up
That's when you say come here
I know your loves sincere
I've got an audience of one
Like the solar systems got one sun
Though this is the first one
The sun'll burn out before I'm done
I wake In the morning to coffee and your calling
You're saying come here
@nateger Feb 2022
The vocal delivery got me immediately! Wonderful melodies and the lyrics work great. The rhyme scheme flows - loving how it revolves around the "sincere". The vulnerability shows through in a powerful way