Just got online. couldn't join yesterday more's the pity and missed this at 9. But here's my contribution for what its worth.
I’ll leave this house, I’ll leave this land
I’ll leave this life for sure
But not until I’ve left my mark
Learn to be free, secure.
My woes, my whims, my theories
Won’t weigh me down not when
I step out from the doom and gloom
And begin to fly again.
I’m feather light, yeah feather light
I’m feather light and free
I’ll float away, I’m fluffy
I’m just able to be me.
I’m feather light, yeah feather light
I flutter in the breeze
I’m delicate and dainty
I live my life with ease.
You knew I had it in me..
Yes you knew, but now you’ve seen
I truly lost my baggage
I’m now the lightest I’ve ever been.
And in the absence of these fetters
I feel emotion rise
I’m full of joy and my heart sings
You can see it in my eyes!
I’m feather light, yeah feather light
I’m feather light and free
I’ll float away, I’m fluffy
I’m just able to be me.
I’m feather light, yeah feather light
I flutter in the breeze
I’m delicate and dainty
I live my life with ease.
@jayjay Feb 2022
Nice lyrical work and great imagery. Deserves some music. #tit4tat
@andrea Feb 2022
I love the mood of these lyrics. Losing the baggage and floating free light as a feather. That is a nice image. I'd love to hear this with music too!
@dragondreams Feb 2022
Fantastic rhythm in the words. And a great story too. I'd love to hear you set these to music!
@robynmackenzie Feb 2022
This evokes a sense of freedom and relief, a real feel-good song. Love that chorus!