I am listening to this while it is nine below zero.l so I might be a bit biased.Awesome. The narrative through line is great. It is so well put together, too. With the percussion and chants. Words tell a story really well. Good work! I can tell you get your inspirations by going places
Great song, loved the touches of comedy (and I double love hoe country music can incorporate this beautifully!). Chant is wonderful - you should be very happy with this
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@msculli1 Feb 2022
The lyrics strike a chord (I'm at work now) wish I was in Hawaii now. Sigh!!! Anyway the song is very good, enjoyed it very much.
@prsongsmith Feb 2022
Dude! Really enjoyed this song -- well done! I especially like the way the chants sonically transport the chorus to the beach... Well done!
@jeffvpeterson Feb 2022
I am listening to this while it is nine below zero.l so I might be a bit biased.Awesome. The narrative through line is great. It is so well put together, too. With the percussion and chants. Words tell a story really well. Good work! I can tell you get your inspirations by going places
@andrea Feb 2022
This is clever and fun. I love the humor and the chant. You paint some great pictures, and I totally enjoyed your song.
@christmascard Feb 2022
Great song, loved the touches of comedy (and I double love hoe country music can incorporate this beautifully!). Chant is wonderful - you should be very happy with this