playing around with a new take on lyrics I worked on today
Amazed by you
2 Feb 2022
Black lace
party shoes
warm floor
coming home
distracted…
surprised…
amazed… by you
I feel like a live wire
Ready,
start,
go:
yes, more please
You look
you touch
too slow
too fast
too good to miss.
you wake me up,
don’t wanna stop
I feel alive
conquering
exciting
Adrenaline
Nothing’s slowing down…
Amazed by you
@arthurrossi Feb 2022
I like how the sparse, but beautiful lyrics lead to flashbacks in the listener´s mind to associate with them her/his own story and memories. Beautiful melody and your voice is always a highlight, Marthie! This is such a lovely little piano ballad!
@karlsburg25 Feb 2022
Ahhh this is truly so beautiful in such a wonderful delicate way. I would leave it just as it is. This really touched my heart. Thank you lovely for a brilliant little piece
@lissielou79 Feb 2022
Beautiful, I love the space in this song and your voice. Lovely work. I can imagine this in a film.
@andygetch Feb 2022
Bravo pianissimo!
@halfwalk Feb 2022
I love the sparse, delicate feel; great use of "empty space" to draw the listener in. Nicely done!
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Yup you have captured the emotion so well. Lovely song, a classic example of how less can be more